OK so i made it to the page in your book on here where at the very bottom where the character boxes are at the bottom it gives numbers i made to 67 Where the kupo had to face sephiroth and he broke the door down so yeah uhh well not much to say there Overall it was funny and maybe that's why this is a fan made so that you may incorporate your own ideas but i think a few times you got outline with some of the characters and maybe even if i dare say Butchered them but thats ok i have not finished it yet it this comment concerns you any feel free to email me